Nice job. Real depth and a great choice of examples, well discussed throughout.Improve the intro as it's a bit confusing and also says you're only going to analyse 2 films!Always use capital letters for film names (so, 'The Business, Bad Boys II)!When there's no non-diegetic sound used it's usually to add realism - might want to throw that in.Some images for props and settings would be good too. Add all of these things and it's a high level 4 (A+). Currently level 4 (A/A-)
Nice job. Real depth and a great choice of examples, well discussed throughout.
ReplyDeleteImprove the intro as it's a bit confusing and also says you're only going to analyse 2 films!
Always use capital letters for film names (so, 'The Business, Bad Boys II)!
When there's no non-diegetic sound used it's usually to add realism - might want to throw that in.
Some images for props and settings would be good too.
Add all of these things and it's a high level 4 (A+).
Currently level 4 (A/A-)