Friday, 16 November 2012

The Pitch

Unfortunately i was not here for this task but the rest of my group still filmed it and these were our ideas and feed back . 
Idea 1- At the beginning of the filming  we chose the main character to be riding a horse from two different points this was the show the posh part within our character, it has a classic relaxing music in the background to also show that she is posh and to show the relaxation we then chose that the main character should leans against a fence and lights up a fag with narration of her talking about her life this is to show the more rebellious and crime side to her . It then continues to then show us her double life as she has had a posh up bringing but she chooses to be a rebel and get into trouble. there is narration continuing through out this which also consists of an upbeat music as she walks to the front door. It then goes on to her introducing her friends every time she says her friends name it freezes on them hitting some one and this is the basic idea of are first idea.

Feed back- we got good feed back for this one saying that it is a good idea and that we should go for this one.

Idea 2- Idea two is a basic version of the first where it basically shows the true environment that a working class teenager class D/E has to live in and shows the impact on there life. This idea was not thought through a lot and we decided to scrap it.

Feed back- We didn't get much feed back as they was not keen on are ideas and think idea 1 would be produced better.


1 comment:

  1. Try and say more about the feedback you got for idea 2 - even if it's just saying WHY they didn't like it.

    Also, last sentence:

    We didn't get much feed back as the AUDIENCE wERE not keen on OUR ideas and thOUGHT idea ONE would be produced better.

    Check your grammar!

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